For my essay about the Sun Dial, I think I will have a few things to fix. I'm sure there will be some grammatical errors that I will have to fix, or they will be caught during peer revision. Another thing I will have to do is add more detail to make the story longer. It is almost exactly three pages, and I want to make it a bit longer.
In the beginning, I had a lot of trouble with my essay. Starting out the introduction is always the hardest part for me. Once I started it was much easier, but I still had some trouble trying to make at least three pages of text. I started to think that I was running out of detail for my topic, and running out of interesting things to say. Hopefully after peer revision and my second draft, I can make the paper much better.
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